I attach whole thesis. Only introduction part (800 words) need to be improved/re


I attach whole thesis. Only introduction part (800 words) need to be improved/rewritten. There are teacher’s feedback/comments in the text.
Phase 1:
A fully
rewritten introduction. This part will need to have a very clear storyline that
relates to the research question at all times. Also, there are a lot of
different theories in the current introduction. This will have to be reduced to
introducing the research environment (context), remote working theories,
conflict theories, and conflict management theories. The main goal is to have a
clear storyline throughout the whole introduction.
I estimate
that about 800 words are necessary in order to fully rewrite the introduction.
However, I find the quality of the utmost importance.
References and
sources are available in the references section.
The
rewritten introduction will be discussed with a professor. The feedback that
follows and comes from this professor will have to be processed and the
introduction will have to be adjusted according to the feedback.


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