I am needing help in revising my final paper I need to ame sure it is easily to


I am needing help in revising my final paper I need to ame sure it is easily to understand read and fixed correctly with all the correct citations included into my paper I need more “citing evidence “ I should be citing a source every 2-3 sentences. The sources I have right now are good besides I would need a new source one that is preferably peer reviewed because the Santa Clara university source I have does not count so if you could find a new one and replace it with. The conclusion need fixed there’s an oversight at the end basically the same sentence repeated twice so try to fix that. I also mention accountability in the thesis but i don’t have a topic sentence relating back to that point so please fix that as well. And please fix the works cited it needs to be improper format that related back to OWL Purdue. But overall need more correct paraphrasing of “citations” in my paper since it is a case study. Thank you


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